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Monday, 19 June 2017

My E-Astlle

his is my E-asttle Writing Test for the term. It is a narrative story. I like this story because it is based                        on Zac in a scary situation at his house and what he does. Here is mine-



Coldy Zac sat alone with an icy cold draft sweeping through his territory playing his new and fresh PS4. He just collected a new video game down at EB games in the mall. Although it took him an eternity to find EB games as the mall is a big as an elephant, He finally found it. Zac couldn’t wait for it to install and right at the second he got on he witnessed an inaudible mumble. Startled he played on brushing it off as possibly the sound of the wind. Moments later heard this sound again. Still scared he sprung out of his chair and hid under his bed where he had a clear outlook of the whole house; “he saw nothing”.

As he investigated further he scouted through every cupboard and every behind every door; but he found nothing. The sound again rippled like a lake through the house and right by his red cold ears. Now defeated by the sound he ran into the kitchen and caught two grey legs peeking under the pantry door. Shaken he ran as fast as he could back under his bed safe again until he heard this mumbling quiet sound again. Now just so frustrated at this sound he ran out from under his bed and sprinted like Usain Bolt toward the pantry door; calming he pulled back the door like peeling of christmas wrapping from your biggest gift. He let out a shriek as IT WAS A …… It was his dog.

“WHEEW” cried Zac as he fed his dog, Gave him some water and put him outside. It was now 11.00PM and Zach was tired and had school the next day so he trudged through the hallway like the carpet was fresh thick mud into his room. Just as he managed to climb into his bed his sister and mum came home from shopping and found Zac in a trance fast asleep.


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