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Wednesday, 30 March 2016

My surfing Day!!!!

Surfing was easier then I thought but I heard loads of tips from my Dad. The hard bit was catching a wave and then walking all the way back out to get more waves.

I love surfing it is my favourite outdoor activity I've ever done. I can't wait to do some more activities at school.

One of the things I didn't like about this was I felt trapped in that wetsuit the whole time. But when I took it off I felt weird.



Here is my POEM

I can smell all the salty air when  I breath deep.


I can taste the salty water in my mouth craving fresh water.


I can feel the waves crashing in hitting me and pulling me under.


I can hear water in my ears, it’s stuck and annoying.


I can see sand always scratching.


I can see cargo ships unloading.


I can feel the tight swimsuit squeezing on me.

I can see blue skies and sun beaming down.

2 comments:

  1. I am surprised to read that you found surfing relatively easy. That is a lesson to me. I have always looked at surfers and thought that it must take years to learn. Weird as the wetsuit may have felt I am guessing it would be too cold without one. Do you surf with your dad? Great poem. 'Craving fresh water' is a great line. I look forward to your next blog post.

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  2. Fantastic poem son! Hopefully we can get you out on those waves again soon!

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